How to Fix Weak Body Paragraphs in IELTS Writing Task 2

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How to Fix Weak Body Paragraphs in IELTS Writing Task 2

Your IELTS body paragraph has three relevant ideas, but each gets only one sentence. By the end, the reader knows what you think but has little idea why. In my video, I use a question about whether the advantages of learning a foreign language in primary school outweigh the disadvantages...

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Today's lexis

screen time

the amount of time spent looking at a phone, tablet, TV or computer

Parents should limit their children's screen time to protect their eyesight.

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Today's idiom

cut someone some slack

To treat someone in a less strict or less critical way.

Could you cut me some slack? I was sick all week.

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